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The Art of Composition, Book 4–especially for seniors.

One thing I’ve failed to mention in my earlier posts is that each book in the Art of Composition series includes notes to the teacher, letting you know what your students will be covering and indicating which lessons you might want to link to other school reading. The lessons are addressed to the student writers, but parent/teacher interaction is encouraged. You don’t have to be a skilled writer–just talking with your student about the discussion questions will grow their relationship with writing as a craft. Book 4 in the series is very specifically for high school seniors–whether you’ve done Books 1-3, just Books 1 and 2, or no earlier volumes at all!

Book 4 isn’t available as I’m writing this, but it will be out very soon. I said that if your students finish Books 1 and 2, they will be prepared for college writing, and Book 3 includes advanced material about writing and editing that will give a student confidence in his or her own writing process. What’s left for Book 4?

One of the modules in Book 4 is a review module that covers, in a condensed form, all of the basic instruction about composition from the earlier volumes. If your student has completed those books, it’s a simple review (you can even skip that module if your student is writing well and having a busy senior year). If your student hasn’t done the earlier volumes, it’s a crash course on composition that will prepare a high school senior( who is fluent in narration) for college or other future writing.

One of the things that makes Book 4 a book for seniors is the inclusion of a guided long-form writing project. The module is flexible and allows your student to decide on the topic and the form of the project. Your students will be guided through planning and finishing the project themselves. I’m hoping to see some great projects in the future from Charlotte-Mason-narrators.

And there’s one more module that I think is appropriate for high school seniors in particular. Earlier books gave students practice with different styles of writing, but one style–persuasive writing–has been left until Book 4. The art of persuasion is closely associated with the classical art of rhetoric. It includes a discussion of values and morality because being persuasive is not the same thing as being right. The persuasive writing module is a mini-course on rhetoric that will introduce your students to the elements of being persuasive as well as encourage them to give some thought to using the power of words wisely and well.

As always, Book 4 is flexible, and the three modules can be done in whichever order works best for your student.

It will be available soon from Simply Charlotte Mason.

The Art of Composition, Book 3

As I said in an earlier post, this isn’t really a writing curriculum–it’s a composition curriculum. Writing is a process, while a composition is a product. In the advanced writing and editing modules of Book 3, your students will experiment with how to produce the best possible product–a composition for someone else to read.

Now that students know how to produce a finished composition, they will be invited to explore the writing process and to personalize it. By the time your students finish the advanced and editing module (level 3–ensuring that all parts of the composition are unified, orderly, and cohesive), they will have created a personalized writing and editing process that suits their own needs and writing preferences. Some writers like to create good outlines before writing, while others like to freewrite and let the thoughts flow. Both processes work, as long as good editing results in a readable composition. Your students will feel more confident with higher level writing assignments because they understand their own writing and editing processes.

Parents will be able to link many of the writing assignments to whatever books students are reading for school, so the writing feels relevant and related to other subjects. As in earlier books, optional suggestions for creative narrations and commonplace-keeping are included.

The final module in Book 3 is an introduction to creative writing. It’s meant to be enjoyable and to give your students a change to explore writing stories and poetry. Because the course is flexible, you might even choose to use some of the creative writing lessons as a break from the heavier work of the advanced writing modules.

The Art of Composition, Book 2

As I worked on writing this curriculum, I discovered something that I hadn’t really known before: I have a philosophy of writing! I consider writing to be part of the Great Conversation–the discussion of ideas among people across time, culture, generations, languages, and distance. Conversation requires at least two–a speaker and a listener. When written communication enters the conversation, the speaker is the writer and the listener is the reader. In writing, you cannot ignore the reader. The reader is the whole point of writing–the reason for getting the words down on paper (even virtual “paper”) in the first place. Unless you are writing in a diary, you are writing for someone else.

Thinking about what your reader will experience when he or she reads what you’ve written is an important part of writing well. It’s a matter of courtesy to present your thoughts clearly (and correctly–without distracting errors), to introduce your topic, follow a clear train of ideas, and make sure your reader understands what you have to say. If you can delight your reader, that’s even better!

In Book 2 of the Art of Composition, your student will work on level 2 editing–improving individual sentences. Your student will learn to appreciate the sentence as the fundamental unit of language, in keeping with Charlotte Mason’s observation that a student “has learned nearly all the grammar that is necessary when he knows that when we speak we use sentences and that a sentence makes sense.” (A Philosophy of Education, p. 209)

In other modules, your student will learn the basic structure of a paragraph and will use existing narrations as the basis of writing full essays (building on what was learned about outlines in Book 1). Your student will be introduced to the idea of style in writing, and explore how to write with various styles, always keeping the reader–the other half of the conversation–in mind. This book also introduces writing assignments that are not strictly narrations, as well as offering suggestions for creative narration and commonplace-keeping.

A student who finishes Books 1 and 2 of the Art of Composition could be given a full Composition credit for high school. These books and lessons are flexible. If you are starting later with an older student who has only one or two years of high school left, it would be possible to complete both books in one year by doing two lessons per week instead of one. If you started Book 1 with an 8th grader, you could stretch Books 1 and 2 across three years, repeating some of the exercises with different schoolbooks. A student who finishes these two books will be prepared for college writing.

The Art of Composition can be purchased (or you can view a free sample) at Simply Charlotte Mason.

The Art of Composition, Book 1

Since this series is still very new, Book 1 is the only book I’ve gotten feedback about. I’m happy to report that so far, it’s all been very good! I’ve been told that students started writing more, and better, and impressed outside teachers who were reading their work. Of course, the real hero is narration and the moms who were consistent with it. The Art of Composition assumes your student is a fluent narrator, and so it begins from there.

Each book has three modules, along with (optional) suggestions for creative narrations and commonplace entries. One important thing that will help your students move from narration to composition is the realization that writing is a craft. It’s something that can be practiced and improved. Most importantly, a student’s written narration is just a first draft and it can be improved. Corrections can be made. Word choices can be altered. Things can be rearranged, removed, or added to the original draft. Bit by bit, your students will learn to treat their writing as a craft by working with the narrations they are already doing.

In Book 1, your students will work on level 1 editing–making corrections. They will work on the habit of looking and listening for different types of errors, going over a piece of writing several times and creating a clean, error free final draft. Some students might be ready to do this before 9th grade, so if your 7th or 8th grader is ready to edit narrations, you could begin this book and go a little more slowly through the series (some lessons can be used multiple times, so you can personalize assignments for your own student).

In addition to editing, your students will work on seeing the order in a piece of writing. They will learn how outlines show the skeletal structure of a paper, and discern how an author organizes his thoughts. Your students will be introduced to both formal and informal outlining and given the chance to experiment with both kinds.

In the final module, your student will learn how introductions, transitions, and conclusions help a reader understand what a writer wants to say. Your students will begin the habit of including these elements in their written narrations as a foundation for writing longer compositions later.

You can purchase this volume or download a free sample at Simply Charlotte Mason.

All Finished!

It’s not a writing curriculum.

Your students are going to be writing, of course, but this is what I mean:

You use reading curriculum to teach your children how to read.

You use math curriculum to teach them math.

You use grammar curriculum to teach grammar.

A writing curriculum proposes to teach your children how to write, and there are plenty of those out there.

But this is The Art of Composition, not The Art of Writing. See the difference?

The reason this isn’t a writing curriculum is that I don’t propose to teach your students how to write. If they been doing written narrations for years now, they know how to write. Therefore, I’m hoping to teach your student writers how to present the writing that they already know how to do in good form.

If you’ve been following Charlotte Mason’s practice of written narration for several years, your student is probably quite competent at getting thoughts into writing. He or she can compose meaningful sentences and get an idea on paper.

But maybe the writing is just one big block of text, not broken up into paragraphs. Maybe your student isn’t sure how a paragraph is structured. Perhaps your student, writing for mom (who knows exactly what every narration is about) can’t be bothered to write a proper introduction. You may hear your teen’s personality and attitude coming through their writing, and wonder if that’s okay. Maybe you’re so worried about your student’s spelling and punctuation errors that you can’t really tell how well they are writing at all.

The Art of Composition addresses all of that, and more. Your fluent narrators will learn to edit their writing both to correct errors and improve their sentences. They’ll learn the niceties of introductions and conclusions, and how to organize the content of a paper. They’ll learn about writing styles and get to experiment with them. They’ll learn how to draft a composition and present their content in good form while retaining their own writer’s voice. They’ll write essays, refine their sentences, and develop respect for their readers, but never be forced to write according to a prescribed formula.

As your students work through the lessons in The Art of Composition, you’ll be able to link some of the writing assignments to whatever books they are reading for school. The lessons include suggestions for creative narrations and commonplace-keeping. Your students will be reminded and encouraged to continue with written narrations alongside the assignments given, because those written narrations are where real writing skills are developed. Composition skills are just the final polish.

In Know and Tell, I explained the process of developing written narration into compositions. I even included a few sections labelled “to the student.” In the Art of Composition, I’ve expanded the idea of writing to the student to a compete and flexible program that can be used with student writers. The Art of Composition, because it isn’t a writing curriculum, isn’t for everyone. It can only be used effectively with students who are well-versed in written narration.

Speaking of older students, Charlotte Mason wrote, “some definite teaching in the art of composition is advisable, but not too much, lest the young scholars be saddled with a stilted style.” (A Philosophy of Education, p. 193)

That’s the line I’ve tried to walk in this composition curriculum. You don’t have to use it to teach your narrator composition—using the plan described in Know and Tell will work, and there are other ways that can also be effective. Your Charlotte-Mason-educated student can write and also knows how to learn, so the art of composition is well within their grasp.

I had a discussion about this process with Amy Sloan of Humility and Doxology, and you can listen to that conversation here.

As I wrote the lessons in this curriculum, I imagined myself mentoring young writers, which is a tremendous privilege. I’d be honored if you and your student writer would give The Art of Composition (published by Simply Charlotte Mason and available here) a try.

Books 1-3 are already available and Book 4 (appropriate for all high school seniors, even those who haven’t worked through the first three books) will be available in 2026.

Over the next several days, I’ll share a bit about each level. The whole program is very flexible and you can adjust your choice of books to the needs of your student and the amount of time you have left to work on composition.

At last—Much May Be Done with Sparrows!

I’m so pleased to be able to share that this little chapbook collection of essays is ready to make its way out of my “to do” pile of thinking, editing, formatting, and proofing and into the wider world. I hope you’ll be kind and gentle with it, and in return, I hope that it will bless and encourage you as you teach your children by the principles Charlotte Mason expounded.

This book has not been written to teach you about those principles or methods. Rather, it has been written to encourage you to think deeply and to keep your eyes on the vital ideas that will make a difference, even when you feel that you are just plodding through your home school days. Little things matter. Sparrows matter. You and your children are important, and education is a science of relations, not a checklist with boxes to be ticked off.

If you are a little weary, I hope this book will bring a breath of fresh air into your spirit as you look ahead to the next school year.

Much May Be Done with Sparrows is now available to purchase in both paperback and Kindle versions.

A Long-awaited Book

I don’t know that anyone else has been waiting a long time, but I have! I began writing this book in 2019 and now it’s 2024. Many things have happened since I began, and of course I wasn’t working on this book all that time. That’s why it’s taken so long to finish! I had to keep putting it off to take care of other, more pressing things, including my share of working on Six Voices, One Story which was published last year. However—at last—my little book is nearly ready to venture out into the world.

Much May be Done with Sparrows is a collection of essays—educational meditations based on nuggets of wisdom gleaned from Charlotte Mason. Her volumes are littered with little gems of wisdom—idea-seeds that sprouted and grew into these reflections.

Have you ever heard of a chapbook? It’s a little collection of an author’s writings gathered together and published in a small format— quite often poetry, but it can be prose as well. (This is prose!) I hope you’ll find it a nice size for tucking into a day bag, to be pulled out when you’ve got a minute to sit down with a nice cup of coffee or tea. In these pages, we won’t be wrestling with big philosophical ideas. Instead, we’ll take a nice pocket-sized piece of Charlotte Mason’s genius, turn it over and and over in our hands and thoughts, and appreciate how precious the little things in life can be.

All teachers need to refresh their hearts, souls, and minds at intervals, and this is especially true for homeschool moms. This is a book for homeschooling parents.

I hope that the thoughts and reminders here will keep your heart focused on the things that are truly important. I hope you will pick up a useful idea or two, like a stray gift, that will ease some part of your teaching work.

I hope, most of all, that as you enter into the little things I’ve written about here that you will find the joy of your work renewed and strengthened. Yes, homeschooling is a large and important task. Yes, the days can grow long and tiresome. Yes, sometimes we get weary and disheartened. But in the end, teaching is not a drudgery. The joy of learning that we want to preserve and encourage in our children is our joy as well. Here is a little passage from the title essay:

We would do well to apprehend the truth that our lives are made up not of years or months or even weeks, but only moments, one after the other. We have only today, this crumb of time. What are we meant to be doing with it? What life-giving blessings have been poured into it for us? If we pay attention to the blessings at hand—whatever they are—this moment will be a moment of nourishment, joy, peace, or labor. Whether we are washing dishes or picking up toys or changing a diaper, that is not a wasted or worthless moment. Those tasks are a sign that we have been blessed with food to eat, a home to live in, and children to love.

from Much may be done with sparrows

I’ll have to keep you updated about the exact publication date, but I’m hoping it will be available in June 2024. We’re in the home stretch with this little book and I’m so excited to show you the cover and talk about it. I hope it will be a blessing to you as you take a break from the 23/24 school year and get ready to dive in to 24/25. Home educating your children is a big job, and sometimes you just need some encouragement. That’s what this book is for.

Books and Reading 2022

I’ve published a post like this for many years.

2017. 2018. 2019.

I did not publish one in 2020. Guess why? I did read books in 2020, but I was mostly in survival mode, and I wasn’t terribly successful. I didn’t have the heart to post anything about reading in 2020.

In 2021, my life was dominated by a few major life events that (thankfully) occur only seldom, and for some people (also thankfully), never. But I had more than one. I’m pretty sure I read some books in 2021, but they were mostly to distract me from Other Things, and not especially memorable.

And so we come to 2022, which appears to be the year in which I realize I have nearly forgotten how to read. I read some books, but somehow the total is dramatically lower than the other years I recorded above. Thirteen. I finished thirteen books. Now, I read more than thirteen books, because I did a good bit of partial re-reading in books I’ve read before, and some of the books (very plural) I’ve been reading simply can’t be counted because I’m not nearly finished with them.

That’s a really terrible number, and I feel bad about it, but I don’t feel bad because I can’t show off a big number like 30, or 40, or 50, or 60—and there have been years when I read more books than that. I feel bad about it because I like books and I want to read them more. I have noticed that sometimes I stop reading because my eyes aren’t working quite right, so I think I need new glasses.

Another thing I’ve noticed is that because it seems harder to read than it used to be, I won’t let myself read second-rate stuff. Can’t waste my finicky eyesight on that! So all the books I’ve read are good books. I will tell you about a few of them.

Nonfiction:

Jesus the Great Philosopher, by Jonathan Pennington.

I bought this book after reading this review by Patrick Egan, and I am glad I did. It was basically a round-about argument for Charlotte Mason’s philosophical insight that education is the science of relations.

 

 

Everything Sad is Untrue, by Daniel Nayeri

I missed the memo somewhere about this—that it was a memoir—and read the entire book thinking it was fiction. It was a shock to discover my error immediately upon finishing. If you read it (and I’ve seen it on any number of other people’s lists this year), please begin by knowing that it is a true story, in spite of the title.

 

Fiction:

Something to Hide, by Elizabeth George.

Do not rush out to buy this book, but if you like character-driven crime novels (ala Dorothy Sayers), and don’t mind some gritty modern reality, consider beginning with earlier Inspector Lynley novels. Elizabeth George takes at least two years to bring out a new book–sometimes  longer. It’s the only thing I ever pre-order for my Kindle and devour instantly. Please let there be a next one, but I won’t be holding my breath in 2023.

A Town Called Solace, by Mary Lawson

If you haven’t ever read anything by Mary Lawson, I suggest you remedy that in 2023. Read Crow Lake first. Mary Lawson takes even longer than Elizabeth George to write a new book, and I have no idea when or if there will ever be another. But Betty Smith wrote less than five, and we remember her forever for A Tree Grows in Brooklyn. Mary Lawson is that good, and is also Canadian, if you’re counting that sort of thing.

I have very, very eclectic reading tastes, and I want to read more in 2023 than 2022. That’s my only goal. More than thirteen. Tune in next year to see how I do. Maybe this will be the year I “discover” audiobooks.

 

(Links are affiliate links—you know the drill. No extra cost to you; a few pennies in the book budget for me. Hope you read some great books this next year!)

 

Nuggets from the Armitt #8

Do you keep a commonplace book? Many Charlotte-Mason-inspired readers do, and we encourage our older students to keep one as well, in lieu of the copywork that belongs to younger children.

Since Charlotte Mason recommended it as a practice, I suppose she kept one, too, though they seem to have gone astray. Amongst her things at the Armitt, however, there is this little book, small enough to have been kept in a pocket with a stub of pencil, because everything there is written in pencil. It is a A commonplace book, if not THE commonplace book. It occurred to me that writing, for Charlotte Mason, was a matter of sitting at a desk with a bottle of ink, dipping a pen after every few words, and waiting for the ink to dry before going on. It really doesn’t lend itself to something you would stop in the middle of your reading to do, especially if you were lying on a couch (which she did in later years because of poor health) or were reading in a sunny spot outside to enjoy the fresh air.

I think a little book like this would be very handy to jot things down that you might later transcribe into a more formal commonplace book. I have no idea if she really did that or not. I wonder whether she could even read her own handwriting, because it is fairly illegible. However, just for fun, here’s a page I have been able to decipher. There are three quotes here, although the top one is continued from the page before (and there’s a word on that previous page I haven’t been able to figure out yet).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The quote at the top is:

“I’m not strong enough; you see a minute goes by so fearfully quick; you might as well try to stop a Bandersnatch.” Here the logic is unanswerable.

—Rev. Cyril A. Arlington.

(The full quote, from Alice in Wonderland,  is “I’m good enough , ” the King said , “only I’m not strong enough. You see,  a minute goes by so fearfully quick . You might as well try to stop a Bandersnatch.”—in reply to a request from Alice, “Would you be good enough to stop a minute?”)

So, it’s a quote of a quote, in part. The first part is from Lewis Carroll’s Alice in Wonderland, but it’s attributed to Rev. Cyril A. Arlington. He’s written any number of books, but I’m making a guess that Charlotte might have been reading A Schoolmaster’s Apology. Its date of publication is in line with other dates in the booklet.

The next two quotes are attributed to Clement of Alexandria, but I cannot decipher the attribution at the end. The first one says:

Clement of Alexandria affirmed that Christianity is the heir of all past time, and the interpreter of the future.

And the next is:

He (C. Of A.) claims for the Gospel the power of fulfilling all the desires of men and of raising to a supreme unity all the objects of knowledge.

I really am not sure what book she was reading, but it’s obvious that she’s reading about Clement of Alexandria rather than a book by “C. of A.” It might been this one, published in 1911.

It’s interesting to me that these last two quotes align closely with Charlotte Mason’s educational premise that “Education is the Science of relations,” and if you read the linked page (all I could find), there’s even more on the topic.

But the real take-away here is that—if you keep a commonplace book, write legibly and cite precisely so that a hundred years after you die, interested parties know what you were reading.

I hope you’ve enjoyed these nuggets from the Armitt. It’s a lovely place to visit. I’ve been there twice, and I was supposed to go again in 2020, but that went the way of most 2020 plans. I do hope to visit again, because you never know what you will uncover in those dense old tomes! It’s always a treasure hunt, and I’m always happy to share with all of you.

Have a wonderful and blessed holiday—Happy Christmas! (That’s what they say in the UK.)

 

 

 

 

 

Nuggets from the Armitt #7

One of the interesting things buried in various volumes of the L’Umile Pianta are records of the questions that teachers had about little practical details. Sometimes they had the advantage of being able to go directly to Charlotte Mason and ask her about how to deal with some particular problem, and her response to the question was recorded for posterity. However, few copies of the L’Umile Pianta are available, and the little nuggets of wisdom have to be mined for. (What I mean is, you have to sit on an uncomfortable wooden chair and spend the precious few hours you have in Ambleside, England turning over the leaves, scanning, and hoping to spot something valuable.) When you do find a gem, you take a picture, and now it can be shared with everyone.

This is a dense page of text (most of those pages are). The topic of discussion revolved around some of the complications encountered when a child moved from one Form to another. Sometimes they weren’t ready to do the math and grammar that the higher Form was doing, and in that case, the advise was not to jump ahead, but to keep going so that nothing important was missed. But for history, the answer was different, and that’s what this “nugget from the Armitt” is about.

It was a standard practice for some history books to be spread out and read across two or sometimes even three years. Because of that, if a child moved from a lower Form to a higher one, the class might be in the middle of book. Charlotte Mason had some specific and wise advice about how to handle the situation, which can be very relevant for contemporary homeschoolers. Sometimes, the chronological flow of history is interrupted by changing from one curriculum to another. Sometimes, you jump into a curriculum with an older child, and their history is already in the middle of a book, similar to the PNEU Forms. This is what you can do:

Miss Mason suggested that one or two lessons should be given to bridge over the interval; they should be bright and descriptive, and should just sketch in the changes that had taken place: the children should not be required to reproduce them.

So, the teacher (or mother) should simply summarize the missed parts of history as interestingly as possible, and the child need not narrate those summarized lessons. That will give them a framework to begin reading the new history or the next assigned chapter, and they will be able to pick up the thread of events and follow along.

I’ve seen many parents raise the same questions that the PNEU teachers did, and since we can’t go and ask Charlotte Mason exactly what we should do, it was nice of our predecessors to write it down and preserve it. Imagine how surprised they would be to know that the whole world could read about their dilemma and their answer, thanks to modern technology.